1/3/2012
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GRAMMAR: I didn't see any grammar errors but please change some few words so it's easier to understand. INFORMATION: I think you included everything that Mr. Hong told us to add so GREAT JOB!!!! SPELLING: I didn't see any spelling errors. I think you're copying and pasting from another website. But if I'm wrong, I'm sorry. Punctuation: You need to add more commas in your paragraph because some of them are run-on sentences.
Spelling: Try checking your 'Convergent Boundaries' sections for some spelling mistakes, because I had found 1 or 2. Capitals: You did proper capitilization in each section. Info: Try changing some words in your sections, to make it easier to understand. Punctuation: All of your punctuations were correct, and i didn't find any errors. Media: All of your pictures were clear and on topic, and it would be great if you had some videos on Convergent Boundaries, if you can fine any. Overall, fantastic job! :)
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